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We have already considered dialogue from a contextual
perspective; specifically:
- the characteristics of theatrical dialogue that distinguish
it from dialogue in other media (topic sheet: Theatrical
Dialogue)
- the role of dialogue in heightening conflicts and marking
out steps in character journeys (topic sheet: Scenes)
Now let us take a closer look at the inner workings of dialogue
— the way in which it flows from line to line — in
order to see if there are any useful lessons to be learned.
Dialogue Structure
The purpose of dialogue (in everyday life, rather than necessarily
in the theatre) is to communicate. Through dialogue, we usually
aim to:
- impart information
- change others' points of view
- reach agreement, or at least agree to differ.
The sequence is important. We cannot hope to change someone's
point of view unless we first provide them with the requisite
information to underpin the change. We cannot hope to reach agreement
(where there was none before) unless new information has come
to light in the course of the dialogue and/or there has been some
shift in the parties' respective points of view.
This basic structure is as important in theatrical dialogue as
elsewhere. The characters will not be credible unless their discourse
follows the normal pattern. No less importantly, the audience
cannot be expected to understand dialogue that defies this simple
logic.
Focusing Conflict
Theatres would soon have to close if all dialogue conformed to
the precepts outlined above. It is the very instability of the
characters' situations that holds the interest of the audience.
When the issues are resolved, the play is over. Accordingly, whilst
agreement-based dialogue may be useful at various points in the
character journey, it is not sustainable in a dramatic context.
The point is perhaps best illustrated by news programming, where
interviewees with irreconcilable points of view are routinely
brought into conflict with one another. This is not only more
informative but also more engaging than consensus-based dialogue.
For the most part, playwrights, like news broadcasters, seek
to subvert the normal process of dialogue in order to bring the
conflicts between the characters into focus. Potential subversions
may be identified at every stage of the dialogue structure outlined
above. For example:
- Characters seek to prejudice the outcome of the dialogue by
withholding information or imparting misleading information.
- Characters use a wide range of techniques to resist others'
efforts to persuade: not listening, refuting or diminishing
key facts, deliberately misunderstanding, changing the subject,
etc.
- The outcome of the dialogue is not agreement but heightened
conflict or new areas of conflict between the characters.
Writers have much to gain from experimenting with subversive
techniques such as these.
Dialogue Logic
In theatre, as in everyday life, the flow of sentences and the
interplay between characters must be perfectly natural. Unconvincing
or ineffective dialogue often results from shortcomings in plotting
(for example if the dialogue is not charged with a sufficient
sense of purpose), but it may also be the result of logical weakness
in the interplay between characters. In other words, if B's response
to A's speech does not ring true, the audience begins to doubt
the realism of the characters and the carefully crafted illusion
of theatrical reality may be quickly shattered.
From this perspective, it is worth reviewing the fundamental
mechanics of dialogue.
When someone speaks to us, we immediately trigger reactions both
emotional and logical.
Typical emotional responses include:
- making judgments about the person based on his/her appearance,
body language, tone of voice, etc
- feeling a physical response to what was said (embarrassment,
revulsion, etc).
Our logical responses tend to take the
form of:
- questions (Who is this person? Why is s/he talking to
me in such an aggressive way?),
- defences (That's interesting, but I'd better pretend I
knew already),
- digressions (What was that he said about cars? Yikes,
my free parking time expired ten minutes ago!).
Both channels of communication (emotional and logical) remain
active throughout the dialogue, but with changing emphasis:
- At the emotional level, we become more relaxed as we feel
more comfortable with someone, while our emotional state becomes
heightened in the presence of inherent danger: for example if
we are being deliberately awkward or deceitful, or if the other
person behaves unexpectedly.
- In terms of logical reactions, our thinking becomes increasingly
specific as the dialogue furnishes us with fresh information
and channels us into particular areas of thinking. In other
words, whereas the opening lines of a dialogue allow for countless
logical possibilities, the range of possibilities narrows as
the dialogue proceeds towards its goal.
It might be argued that this form of analysis is unnecessary,
insofar as we routinely process such information in a split second
at the level of the subconscious every time someone speaks to
us. It is certainly true that many writers can "do"
dialogue easily by simply causing one character to speak and then
putting themselves emotionally and logically into the shoes of
the other.
However writers who are less experienced or less confident with
writing dialogue may do well to subject some of their writing
to more rigorous analysis. For example, if the writer is wondering
how character B should respond to character A's latest speech,
the exercise of analysing character B's likely emotional and logical
responses at that moment may be a fruitful one. Such responses
are inevitably subjective, or course, but their very subjectivity
may inspire new ideas that move the dialogue, and the play, in
unexpected directions.
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