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The concept of a narrator is potentially at odds
with the "show, don't tell" principle (which is that
events should be shown directly to the audience whenever possible,
rather than relayed through narrative). In other words, the impact
of a play is much greater if the listener is able to share the
experience of the action rather than simply hearing a second-hand
account of it. Insofar as narration is a substitute for action,
it must be used sparingly.
Even so, narrators have their uses.
Narrators in radio drama may be broadly categorised
as either being detached from the action of the play or else in
some way involved in the action.
DETACHED NARRATORS
The detached narrator is usually a structural imperative.
Specifically, if the writer needs to convey information that cannot
be conveyed, or at least cannot be conveyed economically, by action
and sound, the situation is usually explained by a narrator. Detached
narration is commonly used to:
- describe events that have happened or are happening outside
the action of the play, but have some bearing on the action
of the play;
- set the scene in visual terms that cannot readily be expressed
through sound;
- describe significant visual characteristics or behaviours
of the characters,
- pitch a scene precisely in time, for example if the action
suddenly moves forward or back by several years;
- mark the passage of time;
- vary the pace of the play (for example, a gentle narration
between two frenetic scenes may serve to heighten the emotional
impact).
"SEMI-DETACHED" NARRATORS
The narrator may stand outside the action without being completely
detached from it, of course. The narrator's role becomes blurred
as soon as s/he speaks in judgmental terms, for example by describing
the characters in a prejudicial way or by expressing his/her opinion
of the events being described.
Judgmental, "semi-detached" narrators of this sort
suggest the presence of none other than the writer as a moderator
of the action, actively interfering with the listener's interpretation
of the action. This form of narration can have a profound effect
on the play, particularly if the narration challenges the listener's
instinctive interpretation of the action. For example, if the
characters of the play behave reprehensibly but are described
by the narrator in commendatory terms, the listener may be forced
to question his/her moral standpoint.
Arguably, semi-detachment is an unstable state for a narrator
because a judgmental narrator seems to become a character in his/her
own right. The listener ponders the relationship that must exist
between the narrator and the characters for the narrator to judge
the characters so. If the semi-detached narrator is not the writer
him/herself, it may become necessary to make the narrator engage
fully with the action of the play.
CHARACTERS AS NARRATORS
Like semi-detached narrators, character narrators can fulfil
any or all of the same functions as detached narrators. However,
their relationship to the action is much more explicit.
In effect, it is as if we were hearing the play inside the head
of the character who performs the narration. The character narrator
is all powerful. For example, s/he can:
- deliver prejudicial comments on other characters without comeback,
- freeze the action, in order to describe his/her thoughts or
emotions (as does the novelist),
- move forward or back in time,
- filter out information that s/he does not want the listener
to hear,
- distort the words and actions of other characters,
- distort the action of the play.
Accordingly, character narrators influence listeners' perceptions
in ways that cannot easily be achieved without narration or with
the help of exclusively detached narration. For example:
- The character of the narrator may be explored in much greater
depth because the listeners see into the world of his/her mind;
- The emotional impact of the play may be heightened by placing
the audience in the character's emotional shoes, as it were;
- The emotional engagement of the character narrator enables
him/her to relate events without compromising the "show
and tell" principle, by turning the narrative into an emotional
event in itself;
- The potential for conflict is increased by the character narrator's
ability to expose conflicts to the listener that may not be
made apparent through speech or sound (such as when the narrator
speaks to another character in agreeable tones but confesses
his/her loathing to the audience).
Insofar as character narrators serve a truly dramatic purpose
as opposed to a purely structural one, several character narrators
may be used in the same production, so that listeners are able
to gain a number of contrasting, even conflicting, views of the
action.
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