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devised for the Exciting
Plot Writing course. There is a table of links
to other teaching resources towards the bottom of this page.
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Sub-plots are not essential in very short works,
where all words are concentrated on the central narrative. For
the most part, however, sub-plots serve the important purposes
of illuminating the main plot and maintaining the attention of
our readers.
INTERWOVEN THREADS
It may be helpful to think of plots and sub-plots
in terms of a tapestry. The fabric of the main theme is designed
to attract the eye and focus the attention, but very often the
effect is heightened by, or even depends on, complementary or
contrasting colours and textures woven subtly into and around
the main theme.
In the same way, sub-plots, though of merely secondary
importance, are invaluable in setting context and adding perspective.
They must not to detract from the main theme, so
it is important that their colours are not too bright or their
textures too heavy.
Sub-plots may be small works of art in their own right, like
the tiny embroidered cat that lurks in the shadowy corner of a
vast canvas, but they must also have some discernible connection
with the main theme if the whole piece is to be properly unified.
CHARACTER LINKS
By far the most familiar means of connecting plot and sub-plots
is to make one or more characters common to both. This has the
effect of making the story seamless, insofar as the reader may
trace all the threads of the narrative to the common root that
is the central theme.
This is not to say that the links between plot and sub-plot need
necessarily be clear from the outset. The reader may take great
pleasure in trying to solve the puzzle of how two seemingly disparate
themes are to be knit together, greater pleasure still in the
moment when the writer's surprise is revealed. Charles Dickens'
Our Mutual Friend is an excellent example of this, in which two
seemingly unrelated characters, one presumed dead for most of
the book, eventually turn out to be one and the same person.
LINKS VIA SUBTEXT
However writers have become increasingly interested in exploring
the idea of sub-plots or parallel plots that are linked exclusively
at the level of events or subtext. For example, radio and television
programmes and series often explore a single premise (such as
poverty is the root cause of all social evils) or event
through characters and stories that are connected only at the
level of subtext. (There is no main plot here beyond the premise
itself, but only a series of sub-plots that seek to illuminate
the premise.)
Arguably, sub-plots are at their most satisfying when they are
both complementary and contrasting. The bar-room scenes in Shakespeare's
Henry IV provide an outstanding example of this. Their high comedy
leavens the serious action of the play and yet, for all the comedy,
this is serious action with an important point to make: in short,
the young Henry V is seen to inhabit two distinct lives that illustrate
and heighten the conflicts between his roles as young man and
king-to-be.
BEGIN WITH THE SUBTEXT
Perhaps the task of devising sub-plots is best begun at the level
of the subtext.
Our discussion of subtext concluded
that it is essentially the truly inspirational, multi-faceted
secret that throws piercing light on every character and event
in the plot without ever emerging from its inscrutable veil.
In other words, if we stand above the plot, at the level of what
we are actually trying to say, we can more clearly see how
the interests of our premise can best be served by sub-plots.
So, say, if we are exploring the premise that poverty is
the root of all social evils through the journey of a central
character from deprivation to crime and punishment, we will be
well placed to see the pivotal points for the appendage of sub-plots
that heighten or lighten the main theme.
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