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This topic sheet was originally devised for the Exciting Plot Writing course. There is a table of links to other teaching resources towards the bottom of this page.

 

Conflict is an essential feature of plot. Without it there is no resolution, indeed nothing to resolve.

Readers lose interest quickly if they feel no sense of anticipation that something unexpected will happen, or if that sense of anticipation remains unfulfilled for too long.

Good plots depend on the exercise of friction that might at any moment result in conflagration.

The friction that is the driving force of good storytelling and drama is derived from two main sources:

  1. the conflict between characters and
  2. the upsets and other changes caused by events.

This topic sheet focuses exclusively on the issue of conflict between characters.

The essence of conflict is difference. Notice how the unfolding plot of history is driven by conflicts of all sorts: ethnic, religious, political, social, etc. Arguably it is the inherent lack of resolution in this plot that causes thinking people to engage with events and perhaps to become leaders, priests, activists, etc.

But whereas those who engage directly with the conflicts of the world are at the mercy of the world, the writer in her/his sphere is all powerful. The writer may choose to create the world her/his characters are to inhabit, the characters, the conflicts between them and the events that shape their lives.

With that power comes the responsibility of engaging and holding the reader's attention.

In short, the writer must appeal to the reader by deploying strong, credible characters, but without omitting to test those characters through conflict.

Conflict in storytelling and drama, as in life, comprises two major categories which may be considered separately:

  • the inconsistencies between the thoughts and actions of a single person and
  • people's behaviour towards one another.

 

Conflict within a Single Character: "Split Personality"

Since we are incapable of fully understanding the minds of others, even those who are closest to us, we can only ever hypothesise about others' values and beliefs. Whereas news reporters revel in such hypotheses about the rich and famous, with all the sales-inducing conflict created by their hypotheses, the writer is uniquely placed to expose unequivocally the minds of her/his characters.

Characters seen in isolation, for example in dramatic monologue, alone on screen or in a self-exploratory chapter of a book, may be persuaded to reveal internal conflicts that they would carefully withhold from public scrutiny in any real-life situation. Such conflicts include;

  • the desire to present oneself as something one is not (e.g. to cover up a lie, or simply in the hope of commanding greater respect);
  • unwillingness to come to terms with an uncomfortable truth about oneself (e.g. a serious weakness or a shameful past event)
  • allowing one's beliefs to be overcome by one's desires (e.g. the wealthy christian or the self-proclaimed socialist whose children attend exclusive schools; think of the seven deadly sins)
  • blaming others for one's own shortcomings
  • refusing to give others the credit they deserve for one's good fortune.

In a sense it is as if the character is two characters with conflicting personalities. Audiences' enjoyment of internal, split personality conflicts may be particularly enhanced when the audience is able to perceive internal conflicts that the characters themselves do not seem to grasp.

 

Conflict between Characters

When two or more characters are brought together within a plot, the potential for conflict is made limitless as their split personalities come into play with the broader range of conflicts that result from interaction with others.

Insofar as the essence of conflict is difference and no two individuals are truly identical, there is conflict to be found in every character pairing.

However writers must take care to choose conflicts that are sufficiently sharply drawn to be readily grasped by their audience. For example, a conflict between two philosophers about the precise nature of existence is unlikely to make a compelling plot without the addition of some spicier ingredients.

Having said that, philosophical differences make excellent plot devices when they are powerful enough to motivate confrontation. Perhaps the best example of all is religious difference, made all the more piquant by the fact that the parties in any conflict usually claim to act in the name of the same God, while often deploying confrontational tactics that are at variance with their professed beliefs.

Arguably the popularity of murder mysteries, too, lies only partly in the conflict that provided the motivation for murder, but mainly in the philosophical quest for truth: the detective's desire to reveal the truth stands in open conflict with the murderer's determination to conceal it.

Another important category of philosophical conflict is the issue of perception, where one character's self-aggrandising self-perception is at odds with others' less flattering perceptions. In one sense this is similar to the earlier point about the audience's perception of the character being different from the character's self-perception, but the important difference is that other characters, being within the story, may challenge the flawed self-perception in a way that gives rise to open conflict. This challenge might be the spur to a journey of self-discovery: the crook who finds religion, the crash victim who learns to walk again in the face of medical scepticism and self-doubt, and so on.

But perhaps the largest category of all is also the most obvious, which is striving after material or otherwise tangible goals (such as power) that are in direct conflict with others' goals: two men fighting for the love of one woman, townspeople in a stand-off with conservationists over the routing of a proposed bypass through ancient woodland, the poker game in which the loser loses everything, etc, etc

 

Characterisation

The subject of characterisation is not being addressed directly in the Exciting Plot Writing course. However, students may wish to refer to topic sheets from previous courses, as follows. (Topic sheets will appear in a separate window.)

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